some stupid poem I wrote. Feedback?

Dreaming

Of my own private refuge

Hoping

It might soon devour me

Wondering

When this will end

Longing

For the blade’s gentle touch

Bleeding

For the pain I have forgotten

Wanting

The sweet embrace of death’s bony fingers

Falling

Into an endless void

Dying

To be set free






The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents. We live on a placid island of ignorance in the midst of black seas of the infinity, and it was not meant that we should voyage far. H.P. Lovecraft (The Call of Cthulhu)